Evaluation

Below is my evaluation  which I have published on Issuu.

Analysis Of My Magazine Cover

Click on the link below the image to take you to Flickr where you can hover over my magazine cover to view my analysis of it.

 

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My Magazine Cover

Final Cut Of Our Trailer: Blank

Here is the final cut of our trailer. I have also added an alternative cut of our trailer on a separate post. This is because we aren't so keen on the soundtrack in this cut but prefer when Blank is on screen as we have taken out the "wobbly" effect.

Alternative Cut Of Trailer: Blank

Here is an alternative final cut of our trailer. This differs from our final cut by having the "wobbly" effect when Blank appears on screen. We prefer the soundtrack from this as it included less of the teddy bear lyrics and overall sounds more creepy and contrapuntel.

Focus Group Video Screening

Here is the video from our final focus group screening. The comments that were made afterwards can be viewed on a separate post.

Feedback From Final Screening

We asked our class what they liked after seeing our final screening of Blank and this is what they said:

Soundtrack was good x6

Jump scare at the end worked well

Jumps throughout were good x2

Camera angles- close-ups and canted angles x2

The wobble effect when blank shows up x3

Wide variety of shots

Heartbeat pulse works well x3

Inter-title font looks good x3

The music changes were great – real horror feel

Sound effects were really well done

Collision cuts were awesome

Really cool villain x2

We then asked what needs to be improved and here was the response:

More horror conventions needed x3

Didn’t like the inter-title text font

Lack of low key lighting x3

Slender in the road – didn’t really make sense

Voices are too quiet x3

Dialogue is too quick

Don’t understand plot of going to the woods – not enough narrative to explain – more inter-titles needed x 2

Would have worked better at night

The blurry effect doesn’t work so well